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제목 Writings 1 등록일 2021-10-07
내용 I have a meticulous personality. Also, I think the most important thing as an engineer is the ability to solve problems. In this respect, from my personality, I can look at problem situations from multiple perspectives, I can come up with a solution from what I find, and I have tried to strengthen this point as my strength.
My weakness puts a lot of pressure on time management. Compared to the time given, it is often felt that the time it takes to complete the desired level is insufficient. So, to compensate for this point, when carrying out a project, always make a plan except for spare time.
담당강사 Allie2 등록일 2021-10-07
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I have a meticulous personality. Also, I think the most important thing as an engineer is the ability to solve problems. In this respect, from my personality, I can look at problem situations from multiple perspectives, I can come up with a solution from what I find, and I have tried to strengthen this point as my strength. ===> In this respect, I can personally say that I can look at problems from multiple perspective and can come up with a solution from what I could find out. I also consider this as my strength. 
My weakness puts a lot of pressure on time management. ===> As for my weaknes, I would say it points toward the direction of time management. Compared to the time given, it is often felt that the time it takes to complete the desired level is insufficient. So, to compensate for this point, when carrying out a project, always make a plan except for spare time. ===> I always make a plan or strategy to use my time wisely. 

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