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제목 | writings3 | 등록일 | 2021-10-07 |
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내용 | If you go as an exchange student, you can get a scholarship (about $5,000), so I chose that school to go without financial help from my parents. This is equivalent to tuition for one semester. I went to the Oktober Festival with my exchange students by hitchhiking. To be honest, I didn't think I could hitchhike without transportation in one day. It didn't matter if I could do it or not, because hitchhiking was already a special experience for me. I learned that I can do anything if I don't give up and work hard. This is a big driving force for me, and that I have been able to apply to this co |
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담당강사 | Allie2 | 등록일 | 2021-10-07 |
첨삭 내용 | If you go as an exchange student, you can get a scholarship (about $5,000), so I chose that school to go without financial help from my parents. This is equivalent to tuition for one semester. ===> . . . which was equivalent to a semester's tuition fee, so I chose to go to that school without any financial help from my parents. |