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제목 My father 등록일 2021-09-30
내용 My father is sick.
He was very healthy and passionate person.
I have been thought that he has always best condition.
He can't to walk himself.
So he is going to surgery of needs.
I hope he is healthier better than now.
담당강사 Julie 등록일 2021-10-01
첨삭 내용

My father is sick.
He was is a very healthy and passionate person.
I have been thought think that he has is always in the best condition.
He can't to walk himself.
So he is going to have/undergo surgery of needs.
I hope he is healthier and better than now.

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