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제목 My special family 등록일 2021-09-24
내용 My family has five members.
My mom is English teacher and is friendly.
She likes to make delicious food.
My dad is a businessman and likes to play games with me.
He is kind and smart.
My brother is an airmi.
He is quiet and likes drawing pictures.
My grandparends is active and funny.
They are good at playing with me.
My family likes to watching TV together.
We are a very happy family.
담당강사 Catherine 등록일 2021-09-26
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My family has five members.
My mom is English teacher and is friendly.
She likes to make delicious food.
My dad is a businessman and likes to play games with me.
He is kind and smart.
My brother is an airmi.
He is quiet and likes drawing pictures.
My grandparends is active and funny.
They are good at playing with me.
My family likes to watching TV together.
We are a very happy family.

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CORRECTION:

My family has five members.
My mom is an English teacher and is friendly.
She likes to make delicious food.
My dad is a businessman and likes to play games with me.
He is kind and smart.
My brother is an (airmi?) - My brother is in the Army.
He is quiet and likes drawing pictures.
My grandparents are active and funny.
They are good at playing with me.
My family likes to watch TV together.
We are a very happy family.

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