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제목 The mysterious canine illness 등록일 2024-02-16
내용 I heard bout this from the textbook.
This canine respiratory illness contagious and spreads rapidly.
It is showing symptoms, including cough, rapid breathing and fever and some infected dogs have progressed to pneumonia
It is not responsive to antibiotics.
To prevent spread of the illness, keep their dogs away from other dogs, so avoid places where they are in groups, day care, dog parks to reduce exposure to this illness
Owners should their dog is up to date on vaccination and healthy.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2024-02-19
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I heard bout this from the textbook.
This canine respiratory illness contagious and spreads rapidly.
It is showing symptoms, including cough, rapid breathing and fever and some infected dogs have progressed to pneumonia
It is not responsive to antibiotics.
To prevent spread of the illness, keep their dogs away from other dogs, so avoid places where they are in groups, day care, dog parks to reduce exposure to this illness
Owners should their dog is up to date on vaccination and healthy.

 

I heard about this from the textbook. This canine respiratory illness is contagious and spreads rapidly. It is showing symptoms, including coughing, rapid breathing, and fever, and some infected dogs have progressed to pneumonia. It is not responsive to antibiotics. To prevent the spread of the illness, keep their dogs away from other dogs. Avoid places where they are in groups, daycares, and dog parks to reduce exposure to this illness. Owners should ensure their dog is healthy and up-to-date on vaccinations.

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