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제목 Lost my umbrella 등록일 2024-02-21
내용 Today morning, I lost my umbrella in the subway.
Today is raining whole day.
I went to the work by subway in the morning. When igot off the subway, I forgotten my umbrella.
But, I remember immediately, So I asked someone, throw to me that umbrella, That person just stare me.
And that subway doors are closed. so I lost my umbrella. I went to the work hitting by raining.
I regret, I should just take the subway, why I requested throwing my umbrella another person.
I am going to relieve my stress with TTeokbokki in today evening.
담당강사 Jorge2usa 등록일 2024-02-22
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This morning, I lost my umbrella in the subway.
Today it rained all day.
I went to the work by subway in the morning. When igot off the subway, I forgot my umbrella.
But, I remember immediately, So I asked someone, throw that umbrella to me, That person just stared me.
And that subway doors closed. So I lost my umbrella. I went to the work getting hit by the rain.
I regretted it, I should just take the subway, why did I request throwing my umbrella to another person.
I am going to relieve my stress with TTeokbokki this evening.

I am sorry to hear your day was not good Berry! I wish I could buy you another umbrella. If I visit Korea someday I will buy you an umbrella. ^_^ Take care of yourself Berry! Don't worry, you will get a much better umbrella in the future. See you next time Berry! 

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