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제목 | Hybridized homes | 등록일 | 2024-02-16 |
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내용 | I prefer homes with a more traditional style. It's a one-story house with a small yard. It is made of wood, soil, stone something like traditional elements. It's a more nature friendly than using concrete, PVC something like that. Renovating traditional house makes raise the construction cost by 25% than modern one. But it's valuable because we are accustomed to convenience and efficiency for daily life. Modern elements are effective in insulating heat, maintaining clean. So It's good to renovate some spaces to modern architectural style. |
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담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2024-02-19 |
첨삭 내용 | I prefer homes with a more traditional style.
I prefer homes with a more traditional style. It's a one-story house with a small yard. It is made of wood, soil, stone, or something like traditional elements. It's more nature-friendly than using concrete, PVC, or something like that. Renovating traditional houses raises the construction cost by 25% compared to modern ones. But it's valuable because we are accustomed to convenience and efficiency in our daily lives. Modern elements are effective at insulating heat and maintaining cleanliness. So it's good to renovate some spaces in a modern architectural style. |